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Jul 05故事完整版 (A Story about Pain, Painless and Happy)
A Story about Pain, Painless and Happy
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| Painless (Pain on his back) | Pain | Happy |
我早前創作了一個故事, 很快便設計了三個主角:
Painless – 文盲, 長期背著Pain, 受Pain 支配著, 每天會到牆收集別人寫在紙上的痛苦經歷, 這些經歷正是Pain的主要食糧
Pain – 長期伏在Painless背上, 支配Painless的生活, 靠Painless 收集別人的痛苦經歷為生
Happy – 快樂的人, 遇到Painless, 很想Painless擺脫Pain, 重過快樂日子
I created a story recently and here are the 3 main characters:
Painless: an illiterate, carry Pain all the day; He is ordered by Pain to collect paper which people wrote their painful / sad experience on it and cram into the crack of a stone wall
Pain: being carried by Painless, control the life of Painless and it can only live by the paper which Painless collect
Happy: a happy guy who want to help Painless to leave Pain
每天Painless都會按Pain的指示到離家十八公里的一幢石牆收集別人塞進石牆隙縫的寫滿痛苦經歷的紙張; Happy知道Painless的事後, 便來到石牆希望幫助Painless脫離Pain，而Happy靜靜把寫了快樂訊息的字條塞進隙縫裡待Painless收集…
Pain orders Painless goes to the stone wall to collect people’s sad/painful letter everyday; Meanwhile, Happy heard about Painless and would like to help Painless to leave Pain, so Happy cramed the happy letter to the wall in order to let Painless to get it…
Painless和Pain帶著收集了的紙條搭綠van返家…
Painless and Pain brought the collected letter back home…
Pain指示Painless吃光所有紙條, 但他們並不知道其中一張是快樂的字條
Pain orders Painless to eat all the letter but they didn’t know there is a happy letter
Painless準備吃紙條時打開的紙條…
Painless prepare to eat letter and open the letter…
Painless吃過所有紙條後, Pain突然感到不適, 好像發熱似的. Pain便吩咐Painless立即再去石牆收集更多痛苦的紙條…
After Painless ate all letters, Pain feel sick, and seem having fever. Pain orders Painless go to stone wall to collect more sad/painful letter…
同一時間, Happy已把所有痛苦的紙條換上快樂的紙條待Painless收集
At the same time, Happy change all the painful letters by happy letters
Painless背著發熱的Pain到石牆收集隙縫的紙條
Painless carry Pain to stone wall to collect letters
Painless和Pain帶著紙條返家…
Painless and Pain brought all letters and back home
Pain強迫Painless在最短時間內吃光所有紙條
Pain forces Painless to eat all letters
但Pain和Painless並不為意所有都是快樂的紙條…
However, Pain and Painless didn’t know all letters are happy letters
Painless吃光所有紙條後, Pain的身體立即變小成身發滾, 痛苦不堪, 頻臨死亡…
After Painless ate all letters, Pain became sick and smaller, and painful, it is dying…
如果你是Painless你會救Pain嗎? 或是藉著這機會脫離Pain, 變成真正的Painless?
If you are Painless, will u save Pain?
故事作者畫者後記:
不要以為Painless不會在現實裡出現, 甘於與痛苦一起的人大有人在, 明明可以讓自己快樂一點, 但往往留戀與痛苦同在, 但別人認為那種快樂是否又一定是他想要的快樂呢?
故事的開始 – 人物篇 (Story Begin – Characters)
故事連載 – 第一集 (Story 1)
故事連載 – 第二集 (Story 2)
故事連載 – 第三集 (Story 3)
故事連載 – 完結篇 (Story 4)
July 8th, 2005 at 8:06 pm
happy把自己的快乐建筑在pain的痛苦上啊,
我想painless和happy不一样,painless是中性的,对happy和pain是平等的,不会抛弃掉一方迎合另一方,因为painless只是painless而已,没有偏倚的情感.
July 8th, 2005 at 8:39 pm
荷马的玫瑰, 對呀, 其實happy和pain只是painless的一個選擇
July 9th, 2005 at 2:31 pm
我還沒看完全集，
只是看到pain快要死掉感覺還滿難過的。
三人都是無辜的，明顯地。
但如果換我是painless，我會救pain。
happy為了建立快樂個體而犧牲pain，
不就等同pain為了吃飽暖肚而犧牲painless嗎？
我很固執，堅持誰跟誰在任何狀況下，
都不該把個人快樂建築在別人痛苦之上。
而且快樂不在於得到更多或更好，
因為愉快因子早就潛藏於自我滿足中。
July 9th, 2005 at 3:21 pm
RIGHT, 其實你看的已是完結篇, 我沒有交待最終painless的決定, 對呀, 創作這故事時, 我覺得個感覺很複雜, 矛盾…
我看過聽過太多像Happy的人的說話和行為, 令我想到像Happy那樣認為自己是對的人是否一定是對的呢?
July 9th, 2005 at 3:58 pm
啊？原來我看的是全集啊。
我相信每個人都會有不同的做事方式跟待人接物態度。
所以我也同樣希望，每個人都要尊重每個人的決定啊。
千萬不要認定自己的那些作法比別人好，又就算建議真的比較好，
可是每個人的處境都不一樣，也就不能一概而論了。
July 9th, 2005 at 4:11 pm
RIGHT, 我與你的想法一樣, 有時有些人很堅持自己的想法是正確的, 便不理會當事人的真實處境, 這點我也想從故事帶出來 :moon:
你可以看看完結篇的討論 http://www.milkjar.com/b/?p=120
July 11th, 2005 at 11:43 pm
:devil:有時候真係身不由己，明知係痛苦，但係又唔想放手。
July 12th, 2005 at 2:35 pm
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July 16th, 2005 at 9:35 am
我就是因为不开心，楼上那位仁兄叫我来的。对我而言，故事并不是太特别，但是那些图画是很inspiring的。
会常来。
July 16th, 2005 at 9:37 am
thanks 死神
August 14th, 2005 at 9:40 pm
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October 20th, 2006 at 6:11 am
Wow, it’s very nice story. I enjoy how your stories have a baseness, not too simple, but not too complicated. They have a streamlined feeling. I like it very much!
October 20th, 2006 at 11:14 am
thank you, Justin!
November 8th, 2006 at 2:26 pm
偶爾經過這裡, 看到這個很有意思的小故事…
Painless這個名字很有意思…它根本不知道, 感受不到背負pain的痛苦, 所以才叫Painless…
最後, 有了選擇, 醒悟到有Pain存在的Painless, 反而是最唔Painless , 是最痛苦的那位…
November 9th, 2006 at 11:10 am
Janjan, thank you for stopping by
thank you for sharing your view after reading the story, different people would think in a different way when they read a story, and that’s the fun part